Monday, November 2, 2009

Creative Blogging 5

Directions: Create a short story (at least 1 paragraph) that contains the following sentence only once!

Sentence to use: I couldn't believe that there were so many horses.

HINT: ONLY USE THE SENTENCE ONCE!

40 comments:

  1. I went to Texas for a family reunion. I seen stores, people selling hats and local daily needs, and wait, I seen 1,2,3,4,5 wait 7 horses! I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. One almost ran over me until my older brother pulled me out of the way. What a trip to Texas that was.


    ~RAHEEM DUNCAN~

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  2. When I see commercials of hurting animals. The commercial’s hurts me. The reason it hurts me is because I love animals. Such as horses, pigs, cows, chickens and every other animal. I hate seeing that they are in pain and they are dieing because us humans. Especially when I see farms I couldn't believe that there were so many horses in danger. They looked at me as if they wanted me to rescue them. I couldn’t, I wish I could. They want to disappear they want to run away. But the chances are low they want to have a better life. They are such good animals, why do they feel so abandoned? Why are they in danger? Why are they dieing because of us? It does not make any sense. It hurts, when I see the horses in the zoos, I want to just let them out. The reason I want to let them out, is because they is not their habitat and they should be free instead of being stuck in a fake habitat. Horses should be considered humans just with a tail and more hair. Horses have feelings and they want to be free and happy. But as for now, they need to fight for their freedom. But no one can hear their voice, because there just an animal. But every single human on this planet, should think about how to take care of the animals. Animals are our future.

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  3. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. I saw someone get trampled by the herd of horses. It was like a riot because everyone got hurt because of the horses. I was the one running for my life because I have a life. I went through a back alley and a horse still was chasing me and when I got to a dead end I threw a rock at it’s head and it kicked me in the stomach so I played dead and it went away.

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  4. One day I went to a farm and I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. The horses were running around in a ranch. There was a young girl was on one of the horses and she looked happy. I would have been screaming my lungs out. After when the horses stopped running around the horses will just sit there and relax.

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  5. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. I was having a dream about horses, black, whit yellow fat skinny and many more. It’s been like I was at a party full of them. I was fluting on clouds riding with the horses like they were unicorns. At times I felt they were talking to me. They were pretty all some.

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  6. I cant believe there was so many horses all over the place eating grass and running for exercise. The owner come in with lots and lots of water and pours it in to there drinking well. As the horses run over very quick the keeper gets in the way so he dosent have a stampeed and they spill all the water. After that the horses just gulp down all the water in a few second and one by one the keeper escorts them back into the barn and they close there eyes and go to sleep,when horses sleep they seep standing up because of there leg muscles and if they were to lay down they would die because there blood would stop flowing right.

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  7. Just a few weeks ago I went to Hanna Montana (Mileys Cyrus) house in Tennessee. Her family has the biggest ranch! I have never seen something so big and with so many animals. When Hanna’s dad was walking me through the ranch I noticed so many horses. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses.

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  8. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. There were so many horses in the stadium .One horses were light brown. Another horses were dark brown. The other horses were black, white, gray and other colors. They were in a herd, they got loose and they ran down the high way and cars almost hit them, truck, ECT. Then after a truck almost hit them they all got killed because there was a horses killer following them the whole time but they did not know so then they died and the horses killer at there guts and flesh and more………………

    To Be Continued ....
    By : Dakarai Griffin
    Date: Monday November 2 ,2009
    Cohort: * 8c *

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  9. I remember the time when I went to the Crane House for the first time. I was nine years old and I was so excited. First we went to the places where the people that lived in the house slept. Then after watching a movie about how some people moved the Crane House from one part of Montclair (which was called Crane Town at on point) to another. Then we went to get something to eat the maids of the house served us a bacon, egg, and cheese sandwich it was so good. As we left the Crane House we took a trip to their stable and I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses! Altogether it was one of the best experiences of my life.

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  10. I couldn't belive that there were so many horses in my back yard. I was like how did they get there so I went to my mom and said "mom how in the world did we get all these horses in are yard". Then my mom said "I bought them because they were on sale" and i was thinking to my self "My mom is scary". I still couldn't belive how many horses we had in are yard.

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  11. I went to my friends sweet sixteen party and we had some delicious fun. It was an ice cream party. We had to have it in a room where the temperature of 5 degree’s. There was ice cream everywhere even people’s clothes. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. They had to have been cold. But they were up and running with people on there backs. I screamed so hard my lungs were about to pop

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  12. One day when I went to South Carolina and me, my sister and my cousins were walking down the road. When I turned my head I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses on the farm running, eating, and walking around. I was really surprise that so many horses could fit on that little farm. One of the horses was light brown and kept looking at use like was going to attack us, then we was think that what if all of these horses attack us, and to let you know that horse did chase us out of the farm.

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  13. I went to the store with my friends to get some chips. We went to Mc Donals got me a lot of fries. Then I went to sun pizza and got me some pizza. I seen 1 horse it followed me and friends. Then I went to burger king and got me a meal for me and my friends. Then another horse follows me and my friends. Last I went home on thanksgiving ate a lot of food. When to go take the trash out, there was an army of horses they jumped me I, I got beat up. I can’t believe there were so many horses that beat me up.

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  14. I wsa going to a zoo with my family. There were lots of animals there. My favorite animals there were the prairie dogs. When I saw the Horse exhibit, there were tons of them everywhere, it probably covered most of the zoo! I couldn't believe that there were so many horses.

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  15. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. The horses where all racers. They where so fast that if they where getting chased they wouldn’t get caught. The horses where the best animals in the farm and people like them because they where cute and there color was cute and they like playing tag.

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  16. Three weeks ago the patriots faced the broncos. For those of you who don’t know what bronco’s stands for it stands for a white pare of horses. The patriots did lose by 3 points; I couldn't believe that there were so many horses on people’s shirts and helmets on the patriot’s home turf.

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  17. When I went to California I cant believe how many houses I saw. First there where 3 then there where 8 then there where 20 I mean I can go on and on about how many horses I saw. Then when I was leaving I saw 5,596,506,098 isn’t that a lot I mean at first I didn’t think it was allot until my grandma told me. She went on and on about color they where but I didn’t listen to her because I was to busy combing my little pony. But any way I think that there where at least 12,00 male ones and the rest females. If you ask me that’s allot of girls to choose from if I where a horse, man I would at least choose 10 at the same time. That’s my article please don t read it thank you have a nice day.

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  18. One day I was watching TV with my dad, and we were watching horse racing. I was really interested in which horse was going to win the race. They were all running next to each other super fast. It was a miracle that they didn’t crash into each other. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. Number 21 named Old Blue Jeans has won first place. The race was awesome!

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  19. When I went to California, I can’t believe how many horses I saw. First there were 3 then, there were 8 then there were 20. I mean I can go on and on about how many horses I saw. Then when I was leaving I saw 5,596,506,098 isn’t that a lot? I mean at first I didn’t think it was a lot until my grandma told me. She went on and on about what color they were, but I didn’t listen to her, because I was to busy combing my little pony. But anyway, I think that there were at least 1,200 male ones and the rest were females. If you ask me that’s a lot of girls to choose from if I where a horse, man I would at least choose 10 at the same time. That’s my article please don t read it thank you have a nice day.

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  20. I woke up one morning. I looked outside the window. What I saw caught me by surprise. I saw horses. Horses here and there. I couldn’t believe there were so many horses. They were going down a hill. It’s strange to see horses at Boston. Well this many anyway. This was the strangest event I have ever seen in my life.

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  21. I had taken a trip to a ranch. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. I was so amazed its crazy how a small place can have so many horse. I had asked the farmer “how does it feel to have so many horses” and he had said “It feels wonderful because they are like beauty in my eyes”. I thought that was very special because he loves his horse and he won’t give them up because they fell you his home with joy and happiness.

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  22. I thought ponies were horses. I always wanted one. Wasn’t that everyone’s dream? One day I went to Wonder Land and saw many animals. I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses. It was like a dream cone true. There were blue ones, green ones, yellow ones and purple ones. They all had grey eyes but there was one particular one that had green-ish eyes. I wanted that one. I hear “Wake up, wake up” and I’m wondering why do I hear this. Only to find out it was only a dream. . .

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  23. where ever you looked they were there.I couldn't believe that there were so many horses.all over his room. toy horses movies books it even smelled like a horse.wihch was not plasent.

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  24. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. Horses are dirty sad animals. Horses are the only enslaved animals to me. They have to let people ride on there back and get whipped by their care givers. Horses are just so sad and ugly I feel bad for them. If one of them tries to step on my foot I’m going hurt them.

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  25. As I walk into my grandfather’s farm there were 20 horses I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. It’s like if I walked into a horses heaven there were black one’s white one’s brown one’s and even a grey one. He let me ride the grey and at first I was nerves but he told me that was the friendliest horse in the whole farm. So as I hopped on the horse it started to run as if it was at a race then I jumped off and landed on my elbow and ever since the I never see the many horse there were at the farm.

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  26. As I watching outside the sun shining you could see the sun reflecting off of my window. Everything was going so smoothly until I heard some rocks bounce up like bouncing basketballs at a basketball game. I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses running over my nice beautiful lawn, having a battle, gun shooting everywhere I was mad my house got wrecked by shootings near my house. I was fortunate that I lived through the horses chaos but I never thought that I would witness that ever.

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  27. I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. I saw someone get trampled by the herd of horses they was fast like vipers I was terrified. I went through a back alley and a horse still was chasing me and when I got to a dead end I threw a rock at it’s head and it kicked me in the stomach so I played dead and it went away. I got up sweat dripped from my for head “Phew that was close”. I doted home and told my mom and she said are you ok I said does it look I’m ok I ALMOST GOT RAN OVER BY SOME HORSES! But I got to get my revenge ill go back soon until then its to be continued.
    To Be Continued ....
    By: Troi Newton
    Date: Wednesday November 4,

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  28. One night I had a dream. I dreamed that I was in Texas. In Texas, there were many animals and I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses. There were also many chickens, pigs and even a lot of sheep running around everywhere. It all seemed so real, but it was just a dream. I woke up the next morning looking for those beautiful aminals but they were all gone. I knew I would never see them again.

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  29. Hakim Iman Harris Jr.November 4, 2009 at 6:48 AM

    I couldn't believe that there were so many horses. Men shooting their Texas Western Guns at the sheriff and his deputies. All I could see was the Bandits and the horses just riding and shooting, tearing up bars, barns and other buildings. I could not stand the noise. There were about 14 Bandits and 1 sheriff and his 4 deputies for backup. The fight was not fair so I put on my hat, tighten my boots and pulled out that gun and I had to draw my weapon. Shot after shot, I pierced everyone where I wanted to… in the head. Only I could be called the hero because the sheriff and the deputies had lousy aim. Some how I missed 1 Bandit, I seems that I grazed his head. I was walking away and I could hear his boot scratching across the Texas dessert floor as he was trying to get up. He leaned to the side in pain and aimed his gun. I jumped to the side and shot my gun behind my back (yeah I have skills like that) and got him right in the chest. I flipped my gun on my middle finger and put it in my holster and stole a horse and took off saying “yee haw. Ride em cow boy”.

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  30. One day I woke up and realized that I was on was on a farm. There were so many animals I just could believe it. I couldn’t believe there were so many horses. The horses were so big that they towered over me. They had nice brown long hair and soft, smooth fur. I just couldn’t believe my eyes. When I told my mom about what I saw she told me maybe I should get some more rest because I was loosing it. I tried to tell her that I was telling the truth but she just wouldn’t believe me.

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  31. When I went to México I can’t believe how many horses I saw there was a race of motorcycle group. They were looking for someone who was a skilled and knowledgeable trainer and driver, and who didn’t already have such a large stable of horses that would be lost in the shuffle. He wanted someone who would care about our horse and keep us informed of his progress without condescending to those of us new to the sport.

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  32. One day i was watchinq tv with my older brother and we were watchinq horse racinq. I was reaaly engage in the horse race. They were all runninq next to each other fast but 9.5 per mile. It was amazeinq that they didn't crash into each other. I couldn't believe that were so many horse. An number 31 named tony kay has won first place. WOW!!!!

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  33. Tiffany Evans, Tiffany Evans, Tiffany Evans my god is everything in this world all about Tiffany Evans. Tiffany Evans is my “ stinky, crappie, stuck up” mom. My mom is one of those moms who work in a office, the kind of mom that is more dedicated to her job than her own family. The type of my mom who knows her daughter was waiting for a letter to be accepted in a play, but continues to receive all this mail from all these companies and all these people. I hate her, I hated my mom Tiffany Evans because she wasn’t a real mom she was a “ fake mom” one that I hated and the one who going to send me to the countryside to live with my dad. I have to admit I was happy I knew it was, I had a feeling, no it had to BE! Jack Evans had to be a way better parent than Tiffany Evans hopefully he didn’t have a job. I was hoping it would be just him, and me so I prayed on my way there that he didn’t have a new girlfriend. I didn’t’ know my dad much he left when was two years old and move to countyside where his family lived. As we pulled up in front of his house I was afraid my mom had made a mistake, but she didn’t it was actually Jack Evans house! I couldn't believe that there were so many horses.

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  34. I was simply jogging along the beach and as I slowly turned the corner, I fell into a deep hole that had to be at least 1 mile or 2 long. I took out my cell phone and tried to call 911 but I had lost reception. My phone had completely shut down. After what felt like a whole entire hour of just falling I could see the ground coming closer and closer to me until finally it hit. The ground had just met the right side of my body and it took me forever to get back on my feet again. When I finally did I couldn’t believe my eyes. I saw all of mankind in this underground cave that had no way out except for the hole that fell through. I saw hundreds and thousands of people and animals but oddly I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses. I was confused and unsure about why this was all happening…but then I woke up and got ready for school

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  35. I could not beleive there were so many horses.Every where you went there were horses.I'm sitting there waching all of them jumping over things,running like they never ran before.I hear the cliking of there feet,when they are done with working them selves out,the horse riders brush there short soft skin. Oh the soft skin when I lay my hands on them.I start to speek up and say"can I ride them", as I ride one horse called peanut because he is light brown, I start to feel happy about my self, becuase I was never intersted in animals. Although This is all my Imagenation, a huge dream, wishing that I have seen so many horeses. That one horse to my self. I couldn't beleive there were so many horses.

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  36. I went down south to visit my family, we went to the rec to go play basketball.Then I went to my house played ps3 2k10 online and got raked number 3 in the ''world'' then i had played like 70 games and got bored so i went to the kietchen and got me some insure and corn so i can gain more wait for football season this year for my high school.So i do that and i get on the scale and its says 145 and i was exstaic.Later i went on the porch because my friend shaquan had came over to drop off my gloves that i had left at the game last week.Then he asked me if he could stay and chill i new my mok would say yes but i wantred to say no because i was to tired to intetain some company espacliy ones that looks all up in my dressers.Also i told shaquan I will ask my mom if he can chill at my house so i went in my house stood at the door for 20 secounds and walked back out and i told my kool friend that se said no.Then he waled away with a sudden thoguht that i was lying because last week i had did the same thing to Alex.Then i called him up and said is he going to practice friday then he said YES BRANDEN FOR THE LAST TIME with the voice of a god.''Then i hung up and said ok lter and went to sleep and had this crazy dream like my coah called me and said these coaches wanted to talk to you about playing d1 basketball for there school this year for a full ride scholrship then in my dream i was running an acdenlty hung up on my coach . Now it is friday i get to school is start bragging to mitri rahemme and hakim and shaquan and kieth saying you guys im going to a d1 collage for basketball called duke university ha ha u guys are not i new i was the best at sports .Then i hear my name on the intercome sying branden report to the office asap i get nurvous becasue the unexpected had happen.I went down to the office they said its was not duke that wanted me to come it was roxbury community collage a d4 team then i storm out the room like a mad man .while shaquan and allmmy friends stand at the door and say see were bragging get s you and i sit there felling higly embarsed.Then i waled out of school and mr ebert tryed to stop me and he said branden top getting mad over little things like tht then grabbed my arm with anger and i said dude get off of me and he said you no what branden you have alot of head of you in life with a good futre i look nd smile and say realy thanks man then he reported me back in the buliding then mr turner said hey branden another collage said they want you and now it is syrics state.in newyork and he said you and shquan and keith they want ilook and smie me and keith looked at each other and say yeah we are taking the ship every year.And fianly my day had gone good.The bell wrong while we was in last class we all got up and tryed to run miss valentine said boy what is your mouth funcation me and keith replied shes backk'' And we left the buliding and i ws happy mr tuner yelle out the window you guys better study for those good schools that want you guys.Then this boy stoped me from walking he said hey dude you took my girl i said well another mans x can be another mans treasure then walked a way he called me a frighting name keith ran to him with a balled up fist i said keith he not worth fighiting then he said yeah thats true and i said hey shaquan aint newyork where all the horsers are he said yeah then i said man why are there so many horeses next t the new dorm we might attend shaquan says yea man why.

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  37. I was sitting at home and watching TV as I flipped through the channels thinking and wondering about what is going to happen to my uncle and whether or not if he was going to be okay. As I was flipping through the channels I came across a geographic show taking about how animal fell the same way we fell when some one is going through some sort of pain. It could be physical or emotional pains. I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses that acted a little like humans. Then while I “ in the moment” I herd the phone ring it was the doctor. He sad that some came up and that I should come down. So as soon as he hanged up the phone I rushed to the hospital as fast as I could and as soon as I got there the doctor was already waiting. I was hoping for good new but by the look on his face I could tell that there was only bad new to come. He held my shoulder and sad that “your uncle has to go back in to surgery” and this time we have to take out a tumor in his liver. That was the worst kind of news that I could get right now and I did not know what to do.

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  38. I felt like I was in a farm. Children are running around and behaving almost animalistic. I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses. There were a variety of horses. There were, black ones, tall ones, white ones, small ones. It was a disaster! I felt like I was about to explode. Why was i forced to bring my lil sister here.

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  39. Wow!!! I could not believe that there were so many different horses ☺. I went to Bobby’s Ranch to go horse back riding there was lots of horses, I even have a horse I always go to ride named Tattoo who is so beautiful and the other animals are beautiful has well, I could not believe the most beautiful creatures on earth are better found in the wild, in the wild I couldn’t believe that there could be as many wild horse running freely and so spirited. All I could do is just smile and stare and not move because there were so beautiful and I didn’t want to disturb them, but the one that caught my eye is the White horse with blue eyes with her baby foal by her side who was all black with a little white patches and beautiful green eyes. While the other horses were playing and running this two were just drinking water and just eating apples from the apple tree, I know that may seem boring to most, but to me it wasn’t. As a young teenage girl who has been going horse back riding for almost 4 years, I have seen horses before, but these two were special I could tell and feel it like wind flowing through my hair, for the rest off the day, I just sketched pictures of the mother and her foal (baby) and wish that I could stay here would never have to leave, even though I lived 5 minutes away it seem like I lived 5000 miles.

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  40. Shanara (American Eaglez)November 4, 2009 at 7:07 AM

    I couldn’t believe that there were so many horses. It was like a dream come true for a horse lover. The horses were black, white, orange, and Brown. They were huge I couldn’t believe my eyes. It was like a masterpiece at large that came to life. When the horses ran it was amazing because their posture was so formal and high it was almost like they ran with dignity. I went up to pet one of them and their coat was so shiny and smooth it felt like a baby blanket being rubbed against your face. They were so calm and gentle ,they were beautiful.

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